When writing action scenes, it helps to keep descriptions short and sharp. Remember, the operative word is action. You have to convey that with your prose, and that's more easily done by keeping sentences short, fast and to the point.
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Date: 2009-10-11 12:28 am (UTC)Also? Lemme know if you need/want a beta reader. 8)